In the Everlasting Love
nothing is difficult so,
being very far but still
close to destiny too.
so inside the heart, hopes
glow like some candles,
in the shadow of eyelashes
few dreams also grow up.
In the Everlasting Love
nothing is so unattainable,
being empty handed yet
acquire a new shore.
new scent of memories
new color of thoughts,
like flowers in courtyard
a sensation is always there.
In the Everlasting Love
a new passion every moment,
the journey is full of thorns
still the way will be found.
In the Everlasting Love
neither any distance exists,
comes after every sorrow
the happiness too somewhere.
In the Everlasting Love
nowhere is any detachment,
whenever hands are raised
desire to accomplishment.
In the Everlasting Love
everything is attained,
so no matter, sweet heart
if you are lost and gone.
Nice effort if it is by you, keep working on it and after few tries your poem will be rhythmic soon!
ReplyDeletethanks for your appreciation. The poem is actually in urdu so rhythm could not seen here.
ReplyDeleteThe rhythm does not belong to words only it’s the thought that matters,these are nice rhythmic lines I particularly enjoyed these:
ReplyDeleteIn the Everlasting Love
a new passion every moment,
the journey is full of thorns
still the way will be found.
I like the near yet far yet attainable aspects of this poem which surely is based on your own experience? Me too...I look forward to coming back to see more of your work earlier and in future.
ReplyDeleteConnie and Akhtar sir thanks for your appreciation.
ReplyDeletehmm...a very good poem on everlasting love...if luckily found....
ReplyDeleteMost of our journey depends on finding everlasting love...which is so easily can be seen everywhere around us but so hard to attain...
Is the everlasting love is love to our ALLAH....is it the love towards other human beings...things...some status in society?
What is it?
hmm...for me....it is the love towards every human being I sometimes feel with in my heart to mend broken trust and hearts.
Still....sometimes wonder....
So...Urooj....nice thought....I like it.
All the above may be part of this everlasting love...and what about INSIDE of our own selves as well?
ReplyDeleteThinking and Connie you both are right and Everlasting Love has much more aspects to feel, but as far as i concern, this poem is written about the Love which first gives the feeling for a single person, but later turns into Love of Allah, Love of Humanity and Love of collective Ego therefore if you see carefully in last stanza, you will find the theme.
ReplyDeleteIn the Everlasting Love
everything is attained,
so no matter, sweet heart
if you are lost and gone.
I see and I really like the breadth of your understanding!
ReplyDeleteLove of Allah, Love of Humanity and Love of collective Ego therefore if you see carefully in last stanza, you will find the theme.
In the Everlasting Love
everything is attained...
Nice comprehension of what takes most people almost all their lives to get...if ever!